Over the past week, I have had the opportunity to
revisit and revise my instructional design document that I am creating in order
to build an online course in Canvas. During this revision process, I have received
feedback on my work and I have given feedback to another student on their work.
I found the process from both perspectives to be enlightening. In order to make
sure my critique had some depth, I found Susan Doyle’s (2013) list of peer
editing guidelines that helped me through the process. She listed five suggestions
for the peer editor; read the paper two times, read as if you are the defined
audience, do not fix but suggest, be constructive, and give detailed comments. This
gave me direction as I began to peer edit.
First, I was able to peer review another student’s
instructional design document and add my critiques to his paper. I found the
process to be enlightening. As I read his paper, I found myself wanting to make
sure that I was giving him feedback in the same manner that I hoped to receive
feedback back from my own peer editor. This made me really think about what I
added to the comments. On the other hand, I found it rather difficult to not
try to change what he had in his paper to formats that I preferred. As an
example, I found his goals and objectives to be numbered in a very confusing
way. I did not know if this was only confusing to me, or if others that read
the document would also be confused. I suggested changing the numbering system
if he desired. All in all, I hope that he appreciated the suggested changes.
Second, I received the peer edits back from the
student that reviewed my instructional design document. At first, I skimmed
through the paper and could not believe all of the comments that were posted.
However, as I began to tackle her suggestions in each comment, I could see how
much better my instructional design document was becoming. The constructive
critique added clarity in several areas and definitely corrected some word
usage and grammar issues. There was only one comment that I did not change the
content. This comment dealt with one of my objectives and where it was placed
in the list. I had purposefully listed the objectives in that specific order so
that this objective preceded the following objectives. All in all, I was very
appreciative of the suggested edits and took advantage of using these
suggestions to improve my paper.
In most of my work that I do, whether in my
college class or on the job, I always appreciate another individual taking the
time to read through what I have written and making suggestions on how to make
my product better. I truly believe that peer reviewing only makes for better
work. I will continue to use this strategy as I work on future projects.
Reference
Doyle,
S. (2013). Guidelines for peer editing. Retrieved September 12, 2015, from
http://web.uvic.ca/~sdoyle/E302/Notes/Peer%20editing.html
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